Work has been kicking my posterior. That said, I have gotten a little editing done. I’m presently working on Episode 009: The Western Front. I have a process that I call the Body Paragraph Rewrite sheet. I invented this for my students, but it is quite good for tightening anyone’s text. Right now, Episode 009 needs tightening. Episode 011 is junky and needs a lot of work. Episode 012 has to be done from scratch. Hopefully I get a little more time to dig in.
